I put K.M. Weiland’s blog link in my last post. She explained the differences between a book’s Hook, its Inciting Incident, and its First Plot Point. The interesting thing is, I just wrote the inciting incident for Babet and Prosper’s novel in my fourth chapter. In this book, that would put it just about at the 12% mark, where Weiland says it should be. I’d pat myself on the back, but I have a lot more chapters to write, so let’s hope this IS the inciting incident. But there’s no turning back for Babet and Prosper now. They’ve committed to the long struggle.